Theatrical version of the animation directed by Takahashi Hiroshi, “The young boss is a primary school student! “While the film is small and the release time is short, it has won unanimous praise from insiders and critics. Even the teacher who had set up a rather whispered word about the person had changed his mind before and afterwards, and he was full of praise in the group. .
Scripter Yamaguchi Hiroshi imagines, “Young boss is a primary school student! Although the original work has been completed, since it is the same as “Island Farming”, it is said that the publication of “The Island Farming” continues to launch “Young bosses are junior high school students!” “Young boss is a high school student! How about letting the protagonist grow up? But he thought carefully, really want to do this, and in the end it will become “the young boss is the old man! “This inexplicable title.” .
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So, in the end, the “Island Farming” series will become “Retirement Island Farming”? .
The girl novelist 椹野道流 self-deprecating the name like a calligrapher. In the past, I was often said in the online discussion board that “the person inside is the uncle”, and some people once said, “I saw him at the bar! It is a particularly arrogant uncle, Self-righteously preaching to young female editors.” But in fact, the person who is being edited is the writer, and the uncle is the editor. .
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Creative Skills’ BOT “The Method of Writing a Story” shared a passage from the senior screenwriter Arai I in the book “The からウロコのシナリオ虎の巻”:
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When commenting on a work, it will be said that “the character image has not been shaped”. If you feel that you are shaping the image of a person, but you are so criticized, you will not understand it; but when others criticize you for “have not created a person’s image,” in particular, it is often not arranged for everyone. Accepted “motivation.” .
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The light novel editor Tsuchiya said that the principle of human action is very simple, that is, “motivation → (environment, condition) → action”. For example:
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- Hungry → (because it is a lunch break) → Go to lunch.
- Hungry → (because at the meeting) → Endure.
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If the chain goes wrong, the reader will immediately feel that the action of the character is unnatural. .
It is especially easy to contradict this aspect when the writer “creates a strong personality and wants to act according to his own ideas” = “created according to the outline”. As Xinjing said, this is often because the role of the action lacks reasonable motivation, or although it is motivated but does not consider the environment and conditions. .
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The work of the light novelist Morita’s season went to the stage of the author’s review, and the reviewer pointed out the question about Buddhism. So he wrote a large paragraph and told the reviewer that “if you change this as you said, this kind of problem may occur, so I think it would be better to write it.” Morita said that he will not compromise on the issue of Buddhism. .
Morita once wrote the contents of folklore in his masterpiece “Playing 300 years of slime without knowing it”, and the reviewer pointed out the mistake. He didn’t know which side he was correcting and he was right. He called to ask the researchers in this area and learned that although his thoughts were not wrong, it would be difficult to explain without comments, which may lead to readers misreading. . Therefore, he took a simple approach and revised it according to the opinions of the reviewers.
Morita said that the reviewers who can constantly point out the problems in this area are very exciting and very happy. He hopes that the reviewers can correct them. Being picked up by a person, he will re-examine the information himself. Although writing a funny novel, the creative process is very serious. .
This time, the review of the work is also very serious. He constantly asks him that the word ”small insect’) is not a kind of bug in different parts of Japan, so it would be better to change it to ‘shoe worm’?” “The word ‘palliative’ has recently been used to mean ‘怯懦’, but according to the dictionary, the word means ‘expedient’. Do you confirm that there is no problem with this?” among them. He said that this is called the author review! .
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So I’m a Morita teacher who has graduated from the Kyoto University for the consultation of researchers. This long-formed and serious review teacher discusses the works of Buddhist terminology, which is “I have to interact with the high-end lady of high-end black hair (no job). “Well,” I am the devil. Because the mother of the brave woman remarried, so the brave woman became my adopted daughter, or “because Oda Nobunaga’s career is bigger than the magic swordsman, so I want to create my own kingdom.” ?